When you looked at me,
Those last few minutes it was as if the word halted.
Why did you abandoned me here?
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Nice poem, could be longer. I wish you wouldve used more imagery and expanded this more.8/10
This poem is emotional I'm 10....only 2 years younger than you maybe we can chat sometime.Anyone if you want to e-mail me it's izzy2you@yahoo.com
A lot of pain in this poem Samantha, no one is worth that! This is a great attempt at such a young age as you are.8/10