Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Take Me Away Comments

Rating: 4.4

When you looked at me,
Those last few minutes it was as if the word halted.
Why did you abandoned me here?
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Samantha Rose Turner
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Margaret Beil 29 December 2011

A lot of pain in this poem Samantha, no one is worth that! This is a great attempt at such a young age as you are.8/10

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Alicia Meyers 27 December 2011

Very great poem! I love it.

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Dylan Dowrick 27 December 2011

Nice poem, could be longer. I wish you wouldve used more imagery and expanded this more.8/10

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izzy Barnwell 27 December 2011

This poem is emotional I'm 10....only 2 years younger than you maybe we can chat sometime.Anyone if you want to e-mail me it's izzy2you@yahoo.com

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Hali Mcnab 27 December 2011

Amazing....I love it! Great poems

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Hope Anderson 27 December 2011

nice poem i like it keep it up: +)

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Hope Anderson 27 December 2011

WoW i really like this poem: +) keep it up

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Samantha Rose Turner

Samantha Rose Turner

New Castle, PA
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