Monday, May 10, 2010

Take Me Away Comments

Rating: 4.5

Take me away from here
Help me escape my fears
I’m dying inside
I’m failing to hide
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Silent Death
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Heather Starfire 10 May 2010

A very moving poem. I would not say you're hard to read. You sound very depressed, as if you might be contemplating suicide. I've suffered from depression and heartbreak myself. Suicide can seem very tempting but I hope you will get yourself some help. I know how hard it can be. Even if you're just fantasizing about suicide, you need to talk to someone. May I suggest that you share this poem with someone who cares about you very much and let him or her get you some help? Good luck.

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