Take Me Along Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take Me Along

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Take me along


When early breeze was setting in
I had seen her
In full glare
I simply stared

I found no words
So praised lord
With simple request
To chose the best

I saw deep sea in her eyes
And tried to swim
But she was not within reach
Yet I tried as such

I could not look at her
When she offered
'Take me along'
I heard it and was proved wrong

The moon was on earth
I decided to defy death
'Will you as you said now'
Can you tell me how?

'Like this' and she led me forward
She was within reach as lovable friend
I had seen in her true ally
On earth she was real beauty

'Who cares for world? '
I whispered self and told
I was required to be bold
As she was now in my fold

Take Me Along
Monday, December 7, 2015
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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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