! Take Me! Comments
take me! reclaim me!
o earth that has made me!
govern my being compleat
til you tame me,
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'Take me! Reclaim me! 'This is our ultimate fate, our destiny. In a matter of seconds, we will be reclaimed.Nice poem.
Wow I like this poem, I welcomed it as I would feel this theme, this is great, I admire short verses, well done, excellent!
A'moon-blast' of a Poem, my dear...Vivid images & well constructed stanzaic puts the proverbial cherry atop of this sundae delight! FJR
Good piece, I like the rhythm you chose. It has a lilting quality.
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7/21/2025 7:59:38 AM # 1.0.0
The rhythm of Earth will help you to rise towards sun and like sun you will definitely grow with courage. With the pulse of creation we feel the heartbeat. Season after season many seasons come in cycle and govern this Earth. This poem carries excellent theme. Earth reclaims the joy. An excellent sharing is done....10