Sunday, September 18, 2016

Take Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take this confusion by the mind
a self-inflicted lack
nurtured knowledge compromised
for enduring physical necessity
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Tammy Hendrix
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Hazel Durham 24 September 2016

Wow! Awesome imagery, words jumping from the page so proud, artistic and a thirst to learn as much as you can to explore and to find answers to questions you have just thought of, as your journey is pushing through all the negativity to find the truth!

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Tammy Hendrix 24 September 2016

You hit it right on the head! Big smile! You're pretty awesome. Thank you, again, for the wonderful comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2016

Take me as i am and, make me part of your own. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tammy Hendrix 20 September 2016

That's basically what this poem is about. That and helping the writer to be more. Thank you for reading. Blessings.

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