Saturday, March 24, 2007

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PLease take me from this world
Please my love take me from this world
Its not the world, we could live in it
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Elysabeth Faslund 27 April 2007

What an emotional impact this poem has! You have superbly gotten your desperation and depression? across bigtime. You took a common theme and brought new feelings and the arrangement of words into it, making a common theme new and heartfelt! Great. Let's see more of this newness...it is refreshing...

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