Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Take Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

take me to your arms
shower me with your kindness
pour me the dews of courage
and bless me your concern…
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Shekhar Joshi 01 October 2009

Good one........liked it.... ;)

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Antonio Liao 01 October 2009

worth comes in the most pleasing obstacle of self esteem, just any body want to rest in deepest cooled of the heart, 'as the loving birth welcome the fancy lure of respect'.....your a poet that cart the humble time to be read in the world of poetry......' hmmmmm 'take me'.... is one of the best poem i owe....thank you and GOD bless.... a10+++

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Spiritwind Wood 30 September 2009

nice poem-expresses one self-thanks for sharing

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Ben Gieske 30 September 2009

A worthy plea. We need to let others know how we feel. Hopefully we will listen and hear their plea and be able to offer them what they need.

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Catrina Heart 30 September 2009

take me to your arms shower me with your kindness pour me the dews of courage and bless me your concern… ------- A message well conceived, a verse of friendship and love....great one! ! !

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Nikunj Sharma 30 September 2009

Its short, sweet and silent.communicating peacefully your gratitude and love. I am sure poets like u, reach far in life and are always there in minds and hearts of readers......

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Nikunj Sharma 30 September 2009

Its short, sweet and silent.communicating peacefully your gratitude and love. I am sure poets like u, reach far in life and are always there in minds and hearts of readers......

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Allan O 30 September 2009

very nice, you have many of my own inner feelings..thanks

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Ency Bearis 30 September 2009

a nice well expressed poem deep from the heart with open arms with thoughts to all friends....10

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Carl Harris 30 September 2009

This is a beautifully expressed poem, Lady Grace, and one can feel the sincerity in every line. It is clearly written from your wonderful heart. Carl.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2009

take me…take me with you leave the clouds behind the tempest humble virtue leads the way loosen the doubts within me.....lovely wish and any lovable lady would want to have her love to be respwected and carried along in arms... well defined wish with meaningful appraoch.. i loved it inits truest form....10 read mine anyhwere....come home...no separate ways.... butterflies around

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Ramesh T A 30 September 2009

Nice poem of recouping oneself is well demonstrated here!

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Carol Gall 30 September 2009

a nice write lady hope all is well 10

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Eyan Desir 30 September 2009

Hmmm...This lady grace and her poems are something else, Well write poems to make your self happy And I think your friends love having you as a friend... So cheers

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