Saturday, November 22, 2008

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I feel as though my lungs are caving in.
I feel as though
This world’s beginning to win.
And even when I
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Bekah Tav.
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*Trusting You* 23 November 2008

Save my soul from myself, that is an interesting Concept. I like that line. this poem is good. shows lots of emotion. good job. Crystal

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