Take Me Comments

10 for this sweet and cute poem. Lovely.

that's travelling light...just a toothbrush! i like it

Sometime Dee, you're going to have to make that daydream a reality. You're only here once. If it's worth dreaming and writing this well about it, it has to be worth doing. xx jim

Oh, laughing, this is cute. You know sometimes all we have is daydreaming. To dream that we can be taken away to have some fun to be fancy free and not have to worry about making another decision. I loved this and especially the ending. A nice write.

This will definitely make me come out of that lazy room which has been my comfort zone. Thanks Dee. I would also like to fly away with you

I have booked the tickets, you ready to go? bags packed? Passprot in hand? ? well what you waiting for lets go Love dave xxx

Great flow, I was happily lost in your daydream....Warmest wishes, Justine.

Go back to sleep carry on.................one of your best yet I think Dee..keep-em comin..Love dave xxx

This is very funny and the interesting style help make it so Love Duncan X

travel? well, you've got me grinning away... -chuck

A dreamy, funny, sweet piece indeed DD.

I'll fly you away any time my darling, as you know. Especially if you promise to write poetry about helicopters after the chopper experience. Sweet piece.