Take It To The Sea Comments
Where do you go when you're weary,
Where do you go when you're sad,
Where do you go when your world's dark and cold
And no comfort is there to be had?
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There is a wonderful tranquility to this poem... almost a lullaby effect. Well done, Linda! ! Brian
Really liked this piece, great rhythm and flow. Maybe a typo: 'And you mind from its prison flows free ' your instead of you? Lovely, though. -chuck
A perfect prescription for the personal ills of modern life. Reconnect to the world which our inner being and senses are tuned to. All perfectly contained in a wondrous weaving of images in these five fluid and very poetic stanzas. Sublime! x jim
This is a poetic masterpiece - I love the way you've set it out and the thoroughly satisfying rhyme and rhythm and, of course - the subject matter. The blue and the waves and the salt and the air and the warmth - a feast for the senses and a balm for a tortured soul. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx
Aye Aye! ! Completely agree with you.One can just lose one self and become one with nature. Wonderfully said with just the right words and rythm. TO
CLEARLY AWESOME WORK, MIDNIGHT...FROM BOW TO STERN! Amazing, perfectible metering....Structure crisp & as mellifluous as a coin tossed 'cross a glaced ice-pond....Nice storylne & i think as meter & rhythm go....this may be your finest piece in those principal areas...Kudos & a hearty & salted AYE-AYE! Frank/F j R
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To be held up by the loving arms of the Mother of life. What you have written is so very true...the touch of the water, flowing around you, floating...looking at the stars. Are you drawn to water? Something so eternal in foam, waves, depth. Great write! xxElysabeth