Friday, December 18, 2015

Take It Or Leave It Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing here a victim of a slanderous tongue
Pleading my innocence with a song left unsung
Easing my troubles with liquor and cigarettes
Trying to imagine what happened inside the silhouettes
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A B Faniki 24 September 2019

I read it all is brilluant the words are moving and candid. Thanks for sharing. Great write

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Anzelyne Shideshe 11 August 2016

My love will resonate throughout the night..., , ........, ., , , , , , , , ...., , with a shower of incessant tears in our final hours Love and pain it is only tears can soothe the pain. Thanks for sharing Paul!

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Paul Amrod 11 June 2018

Hi Anzelyne, I missed that you made this comment. Thank you so dearly, Paul

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Galina Italyanskaya 08 January 2016

A sad love story: uncompromisingness can be cruel as surgeon's knife. I like your poem, Paul!

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Paul Amrod 21 January 2016

Hi Galina, Yes I lived through thsis with two women and thank God. It is a very sad world without forgiveness, All the best, Paul

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Paul Amrod 24 December 2015

Danke Elias, Ich wünsche auch eine gemütliche Weihnachten. This is about my first German girlfriend but I am a happy Grandpa these days. Lieben Gruß Paul

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 December 2015

schönes Gedicht mein Freund, frohe Weihnachten Ellias :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 22 December 2015

MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU, TOO, Paul. Thanks

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Paul Amrod 22 December 2015

Hi Fabrizio, Buon Natale and Merry Christmas I wish also for our compilations very good accolades and a series of applause, Thanks again for asking me, All the best, Paulo

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 December 2015

book published go to Google Group Ebook Poetry Against Terror

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Paul Amrod 22 December 2015

Hi Fabrizio! ! Terrific! Just in time for Christmas. Thank you for choosing me again. Boun Natale, Paulo

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 December 2015

Losing feelings hurt so much I just can not explain Overflowing affections do not seem to halt the pain Marvelous diction of the wonderful soliloquy. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Paul Amrod 18 December 2015

Hi Ratnakar, Thank you so much. I see you feel the nice phrases. Greetings, Paul

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2015

Very wonderful sharing done definitely.10

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Paul Amrod 18 December 2015

Hi Kumarmani, I wish you as well a wonderful Christmas and peace and coziness, Thank you so much, Paul

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