Sunday, January 13, 2008

Take It O' Leave It Comments

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my hand is still wet.
our mixture of sweat.
been holding so long.
lost humming our song.
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Landrey
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 22 January 2008

the last four lines change the mood so much that i myself could feel your emotions. spectacular.

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Sylvi Sylva 13 January 2008

like the style, Landrey... keep em coming. voted.

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Landrey

Landrey

Texas
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Texas
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