Your poetic views are good
but you must try
and
take charge of your life
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life has many hurdles so you alone must row your boat don't let anyone else fiddle, ...... truly written, thanks for sharing
guard yourself a voice always tell me make a wise decision no one else will lose if you let EGO overrule be thoughtful, ....... wisely penned
only you can for yourself care ......... yes truly, wisely and logically said,
take charge of your life rogues abound everywhere, ..... from deep observation these two lines have come, thanks for sharing
A very thoughtful and sensible piece of advice to the upcoming poets. Thanks, Dear Friend. I quote: take charge of your life / no one else will lose / if you let EGO / overrule /....so you alone must row your boat....
no not really trying to voice my own experiences in this vast worldly valley full of bigotry one does experience daily not only me, ..... um- hu -m, ..... you are an experienced poet, says your poems
age wise maybe I have studied the human mind for over so many decades but love to stan ANON thanks