Thursday, August 23, 2018

Take Caution O Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take caution O thought, thine offspring is act,
Raise the child, the father of thine habit,
The two children are values and belief,
With good thoughts are one's precincts well-lit,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2018

values and beliefs in good thoughts

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 August 2018

Such a powerful sestet, Aniruddha...10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2018

To Poem Hunter, The list of poetry Topics seems to me quite inadequate. This poem, for instance, I was forced to choose 'Warning' as the topic, which is not appropriate. We have both 'alone' and '; 'loneliness; childhood and children; crazy as well as funny; etc.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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