Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Take Away Agony And Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drop by drop
Never stop
Be on top
Till I say nope
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

o, rain you come again To take away agony and pain beautiful write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

o, rain you come again To take away agony and pain. what a beautiful write Ramesh Rai5 minutes ago loved it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

it should be more like mothernature April Moore5 minutes ago mother nature is to be taken serious. Comment +1 *

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

it should be more like mothernature April Moore5 minutes ago mother nature is to be taken serious. Comment +1 * Josefin Östmark8 minutes ago Love the rhyming! You're an amazing writer. :) Comment +1 Great concept.. Miss on the language.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Jessie Miranda3 minutes ago The grasp on the language a fail, tho the concept was great, your use of words were innaffective, and a miss, the rhyme scheme was a subtle throb of in and out, and use of some words are useles

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Drop by drop Never stop

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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