Monday, March 7, 2016

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A cup of sweetness
A cup of heaven
A cup of magic
A cup of love
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Felicia Moira Longman
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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2016

Very interesting ending. Loved it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 March 2016

A cup of sweetness......... A cup of bitterness in these first two stanzas you play with the contrasts which is very effective and then you come to the conclusion there will never be us. at the end is it very negative in view. this is my only question. a very fine poem. thank yu dear poetess. tony

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ah yes, i tend to do it like that so that it was so realistic that even two things are opposite they cannot be together, even if there is an attraction. thank u

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2016

we can be us, good thought..

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