Monday, February 22, 2016

Take A Look In The Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.8

Take a look in the mirror
Into your memories, Into your thoughts
Into your present, Into your past
Somehow I am there awake
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Aabid Masroor
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2018

Into your memories, Into your thoughts Into your present, Into your past....... i am there awake....... a fine poem....... sweet memories....... enliven....human soul and the reflections........ thank u. tony

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Rajnish Manga 21 August 2017

Congratulations.. Once again I am here to savour the exquitely crafted expressions. Thanks.

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Seamus O Brian 21 August 2017

The subject of this poem is advising the object to consider his/her reflection, but there is obviously a connection here between the subject and the object of the poem, which creates a fascinating duality 'mirroring' the connection between the object and his/her reflection. We are left to contemplate and fill in the blanks between the stanzas regarding the relationship while contemplating the intriguing concept of the reflection of a human soul allegorized by the reflection of an image. Nicely done, good poet.

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Bernard Snyder 21 August 2017

Congrats Aabid. Great poetry.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 August 2017

Memories! ! Take a look into the mirror! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sarah Persson 21 August 2017

A beautifully written poem, congratulations on poem of the day

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 August 2017

And feel the same last rainfall Out me and you and you and me Thunders and showers that our canopy Whenever it is rainfall, your eyes, tears will fall As clouds bring to fading flower As last spoken words of forgotten lover Nice and lovely way of appreciation of memories. Thanks. Subhas

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2017

Again you are here :) :) Wonderful poem, there is image in our mind that we can see...like a mirror, present looking at past...a love story but forgotten one but in this mirror all are here again....it just preserved.............in time

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Memories are always sweet to remember.. Well written Congratulations

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Memory is mirror that reflect the heart like face. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulation for the poem of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Memory is mirror that reflect the heart like face. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulation for the poem of the day

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Nosheen Irfan 21 August 2017

Beautiful writing. Congrats on being the poet of the day. Well-deserved.

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Tom Allport 21 August 2017

a wonderful poem with a message of how it is important to take time out and reflect on things most treasured? ...............well written AM.

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Nudershada Cabanes 21 August 2017

Beautiful poem. Mirror reflects who we are and within us there's a mirror that we rarely look at which reflect our true nature.

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Richard Wlodarski 21 August 2017

Love the rhythm. Would make a great song. A powerful ode to the mind. Most worthy of Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Aabid!

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Liza Sudina 21 August 2017

Genuine and sophisticated dedication to the beloved woman.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 August 2017

Great work..... a full 10++++++ Reminds me of the song MORROR TO MIRROR popularized by AMERICA: Mirror To Mirror I haven't seen forever Don't even know her name I call on dreams and other schemes To try and win that game Now that it's over, darling Look into my eyes Seein' your own reflection Much to your surprise We're seein' mirror to mirror Face to face We look but we cannot see Mirror to mirror Seems to trace What happened to you and me And though we tried in earnest The distant silence yells We call on wings and other things To try and break that spell Now that it's over, darling Truth in the common cause We stare at our own indifference By seeing the other's flaws We're seein' mirror to mirror Face to face We look but we cannot see Mirror to mirror Seems to trace What happened to you and me Oh, mirror to mirror, mirror to mirror Mirror to mirror, what's come over me As we look inside, there's nowhere to turn There's nowhere to hide Now that it's over, darling Look into my eyes Seein' your own reflection Much to your surprise We're seein' mirror to mirror Face to face We look but we cannot see Mirror to mirror Seems to trace What happened to you and me Oh, mirror to mirror, mirror to mirror Mirror to mirror, what's come over me Mirror to mirror, mirror to mirror Mirror to mirror, what's come over me

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2017

Human nature is analogical to various seasons as they represent different moods of nature. Thanks..... 'Whenever it is rainfall, your eyes, tears will fall'.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 March 2016

Verily a poem reflecting introspection

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