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I can see beyond the sky When I am dreaming... And even yon of the universe when in love... A lovely song of love, dear poet

When I am not asleep I can see love in your eyes Those are blue as ocean deep A beautiful song of love with a hidden sense of longing and a tinge of melancholy! A 10

I like this poem all the way down to where you come to the grave. Gives me a shudder. On the whole it is a beautiful poem. Well done Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poems sometimes.