Tainted Throb......What We Do To Our Hearts! Comments

How hearts once pure and flawless are marred and deprived of their beauty on bumpy rides of life. And how Nature's guidance is ceased. It's one of your complicated poems not easy to understand at first reading.

Beautiful words, and yes we do all these things to our hearts, 10 Lynda xx

a beautiful write.........plz see my 10 ++

fabulous usage of words... splendid rhymes with ingrained message.10 ++++ Regards Kushal

wowwwwwwww a plethora of rhymes for my tired eyes to shine a straight tenner from meeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

Such a profound poem written crafted meticulously with fine end rhymes.............fine continous poem structured.....10+++

Very different and deep poem. well done.

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Wow, the story telling flows so smooth and the rhyme makes it even better on this poem. You have a grasp of the written word and the heart. Thank you for sharing. :)

wow another one..... good work.

a meaningful throb...well presented...10

A real profound write.......Great poetry crafted....what else i have to say, you have painted well.10+++

In the right mind this thought can be passed clean from one eye unto the other...iip

How thought provoking this write Saadat, images you paint make me want to read again and delve deeper - Well done

that s a great write indeed Sadaat. I like the ending... 'In low; perfidious night. Once a guiding light! Driven to scrawny blight' very thought provoking one indeed..I got to read it again...and nice rhymes... adds flow to your poems...10++ best wishes/with love shan

this is such a different read..............loved it.....

Nicely penned with rhymed words :)

Your words march in rhythm like colorful soldiers. The images you share are thrown seemingly at random on the page and a reader who seeks to make literal sense of them may be disappointed. Better, I think to let go and listen to the tramping feet of the poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

a beautiful poem written in a humble manner..grace

A thought provoking poem, I'm trying my best to comprehend in it's essence. What I'm all certain is that your throbing heart is all dedicated. Your passion for poetry and proffesion is aglow, I like it. Regards