Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Tainted Souls Comments

Rating: 2.5

Trying to redefine
What the truth really means.
Denial, abuse, and violence,
Fills the now filthy, polluted air.
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Fab Ricciardi
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Kay Staley 06 October 2014

I just wonder where the author stands with this? Is the authors soul tainted too? Who is this poem adressed too? Who is he to brand the souls as tainted? Nice horrifying imagery and language. Fun to read but needs more details and less vagueness. It could be a little bit colder, harsher and more ironic for my taste.

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Jessica Galvan 25 February 2006

your like me, your rage against the world is sense we'll have to get used to

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