Sunday, January 20, 2019

Tahiti Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were living it up in Tahiti.
Just me and my sweetie.
Soaking up the sun and drinking margaritas on the beach.
Hugging and kissing my sweet peach.
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Lamar Cole
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2019

A lovely and vivid portrayal of a wonderful place. Beautifully written with great rhyme.

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Practicing Poetess 21 January 2019

Makes me want to book a Tahiti holiday, pronto! : -)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2019

A wonderful poem, Lamar.................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 January 2019

Tahiti sunset is wonderfully pictured through words of expression in this poem in best feeling...10

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