Oh, quietly asleep Thou Art
In my deepest heart, all alone
Please wake up my Beloved!
I’m waiting behind closed door
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Though I have not read the original poem, your translation of if has style and poise. A very interesting write.
Thank you very much. I try my best to get the deep message of Tagore's song across in my translation.
A quiet impatience beneath the surface, wanting his beloved to wake up. You can feel the anticipation of her waking up, yet it never happens and the darkness continues to hide her. Wonderful translation, Tushar. Love this one! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn