Wednesday, November 12, 2014

~tachyon Travels~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Welcome to the world within your mind
Throughout the various layers within
This construct you will find disturbing
Sights and fancied flights unnerving
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Kevin Patrick 09 December 2014

A rocking rolling exploration of metaphysical with Jungian undertones, there is so much hear to dissect and read that it requires multiple reads. Im reminded of a quote The beauty about the unconscious is that it is really unconscious, there are so many undertones to how the universe operates that we can only perceive but a fraction of everything around us. For instance the idea that the table in which I write this on the keyboard, is composed of billions of billions of atoms, and the distance between them is but the space of galaxies is something truly breathtaking, this work summarizes it. A tachyon is a good title for it, considering that in many ways it theoretically exists as a time travel particle, our conscience and memories can reflect on the past, and even anticipate future scenarios. We are prisoners of body but not in spirit, what we extract in our consciousness the subconscious is free to dance between the lines. Good shape for modern mysticism. A wonderful philosophical lamentation, the Dao approves.

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Abekah Emmanuel 29 November 2014

Very philosophical and captivating. Breaking the virginity of one's mind is not an easy thing to do....great write Ed.

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Jena Crowe 24 November 2014

Anime is so 2010 My Tachyon told me to say that.

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Daniel Brick 23 November 2014

This is a stunning Journey Poem! I don't use the word stunning lightly. I've read many times over the past seveal weeks - I've lost track - and every reading has been both an adventure and an education. The society must have chosen a particular time frame in which to reveal to people the truth of their existence which is so different from their experience of it. The tour guide tells them what they learn will be disturbing and unnerving but also substantive. What else can you do but accept the truth? The tour guide gives them two insights - we are different versions of yourselves and this is a journey not through soace and time (both illusions) but through your mind. And what an arena of wonders it is! I love this description - GHOSTS YOU HAVE NOT PROJECTED BUT HAVE BLED THROUGH THE BOUNDARIES OF YOUR IMAGINATION (FROM SOMEONE ELSES) . Some are harmless, others are malevolent.

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Jessica Dehn 20 November 2014

hmmm to escape the confines of ones self and reach higher then ever before. Well done. I like it!

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