Wednesday, September 20, 2017

Tacet Lacrimae (Silent Tears) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see her….she brushes her cheek..slowly…gently,
then holds her hand to her lips
tasting the salt, bitter as wormwood.
Her eyes a turbulent ocean thrashing within a teardrop.
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Shaun Cronick 02 October 2020

A wonderful poem with the woven elements of sadness and and a tinge of mystery Dying to know her backstory but the best stories/poems are sometimes the ones best left untouched, alone and open ended, tantalising the reader and to keep them hanging on by a thread. A poem which displays its final thread as hope. A golden thread. Five stars Lodigiana and many thanks for writing and sharing again fine quality. Take care.Shaun.x.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2017

No one can make her heart smile! ! A mile away from her home; if only she could allow me to try! While i bring peace to her heart with my poems. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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