Monday, July 7, 2014

Tablets Of Sand Comments

Rating: 4.8

I ran down towards the ocean,
Since the threatening waves were gone.
I climbed up on a massive rock,
Which stood firmly and all alone.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2019

I've enjoyed reading and reciting your poem. I think, indeed you wrote it on the 'Solid Rock'. Hope to read some more of your poems.

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Galina Italyanskaya 07 December 2014

I enjoyed) And I think that it depends on your faith. If you believe in what you're doing, then you're writing it on the rock.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 November 2014

on the tablets made of sand Where the waves make them disappear? but your writing will exist for ever as beautiful poems..

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F J Thomas 30 July 2014

I thought your words may have had that inspiration :) A beautiful way to set your own analogy Loyd

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