Thursday, October 20, 2011

Table Mountain Comments

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At its feet,
two oceans meet.
Yet, it towers above,
gifted by God's love.
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 22 November 2011

'A flat-topped mountain? What about a straight fountain! ' Jacqueline, I think you have used Imagery, I thin you are speaking about mountains and beauty of the nature...... May even There are implication that you might be speaking about human meet... However, This poem has some mystic charm............. I appreciate the way you pictured nature! You won my heart... But I can't count how many times you won it. Do you belong to there or what ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :)

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Vipins Puthooran 20 October 2011

Beautiful poem, May God pours his mercy on that flat moutain! Excellent write!

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Stefanie Fontker 20 October 2011

Interesting. Where 'two oceans meet.' Sounds very beautiful, almost serene, a sight to behold and an experience to remember I am sure. Thank you for this.

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