Friday, July 28, 2006

Table Fan Comments

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Quite a pair, we are
My table fan and me:

We both sit still,
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Pradeep Dhavakumar
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Joseph Daly 28 July 2006

Pradeep, I reckon that if you broke this up into couplets that it would read better. This seems to want to force all its ideas down the reader's throats. It is a really good piece but, as I have stated, it should be broken up.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar

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