Sunday, May 23, 2010

' Ît's Âlrìght... ' Comments

Rating: 2.6

Thanks that you left me behind,
i had nothing to give..
Glad that you've saved your time,
it's alright..
...
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Menime Soul
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Sherri Coulter 01 July 2010

Menime, are you familiar with Helium-Writing channel? There is a song catagory in the creative writing channel-this is lovely like a song and should be placed there for rating by peers. check it out. Love the style of your writing!

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