Sunday, September 29, 2013

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Rating: 3.5

Drug induced sleep
Deceives watching eyes
Gathered around the dying bed
that you pass peacefully into oblivion.
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Susan Williams 28 September 2018

The darkness out side the curtained window; - -an image simple and effective and emotionally charged- -words are amazing, aren't they?

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Tyler Howard 09 March 2014

Very good usage of descriptive adjectives throughout the poem, as well as very well placed verb usages to captivate a visual effect of the emotion expressed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

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