Sunday, May 17, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

This…thing… which visits me,
torturer so intimate
which knows me better than I know myself:
calls out all my resources
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Michael Shepherd
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Fay Slimm 17 May 2009

'What is this thing called love' - a popular song of moons ago - - yet I feel this piece is not announcing that fact Michael - - your verses are always full of profundity - - makes the reader think - hhhhmmmm - - pain control comes to mind but in either case another thought-provoking winner - - and a greeting of much warmth from Fay....xxxx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

Brilliant work with nice ending: 10++ 'This poem a knowing smile; black demon with an angel’s eyes.This poem a knowing smile; black demon with an angel’s eyes.'

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