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I like your ending.

Your title is quite inventive - emphasizing the source from which the secret comes.

It's funny, my mother's church was a blue and yellow machine that spat out tickets with 'LOTTO' written on the side... and her dream was to win enough money to build her a house that would house her children, and their children, and future children as well... and must've spent a fortune to try and get it... To the love for our mothers! Lee

In story telling style, about creative/recreative writing, art is long - life short

a real nicd message, Karina..wonderful relationship also with your Mom

Your relationship like your poem remarkable 10 Chris x

yeah, I know wantin to fulfill filial dreamz n den d suffocation at not havin fulfilled ur own. good shot.

Wonderful poem, wonderful you loving your Mom as you do....I think there's a book called that out 'The Secret' or 'Secret to Success.' love your writing Karina. You share 'you' and that makes the poems even better, when it's about your own life and/or feelings on any subject or experiences..........~~~~~~~marci.~~~~~~~ :)