System, People And Family Comments

I was drawn into this poem because of its title and boy it is really wonderful. The manner in which you drew similarities and differences between an impersonal, apparently logical system devoid of all emotions, and family values that are based upon emotions and (often) not-at-all rational feelings and sentiments of the members is a wonderful one... The dharma of the family is always different from the dharma of the system, and we had seen what happens when they collide in Ram - the raja of Ayodha, or the husband of Sita? ? A brilliant poem out here, one that deserves to be applauded on its merits of bringing out a philosophical concept through analogy.. Thank you for sharing.

Poem touches the heart with intimacy of the family as source of happiness. The close bond of emotion takes root From the time of child's first touch Of smiling mother's sweet breast Beautiful lines build up the family saga. Thank you.