Thursday, April 4, 2013

Syria - Sonnet For A Rebel Soldier (For Syria And All Conflict) Comments

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Shabbiha, pariah, hero or king
Al' karm now kindling in young withered skin,
Ascend indignant sectarian heir
Arms vanquish dissent by summary justice,
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Captain Cur 21 April 2013

Wars linger in the heart and the absent doors to the mind will always leave the soul vacant. Deep message conveyed here.

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Valerie Dohren 13 April 2013

Very inspired Danny, much insight in your lines - no war is ever truly won, they are scars on the face of humanity.

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Valsa George 11 April 2013

Words like brutalised carcass, virus unleashed, the rubble all talk of a gory state of affairs! Is there a silver lining of peace somewhere? As ever, a poignant write

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Unwritten Soul 11 April 2013

Definitely agreed with Diane... the mind evolves its thought around it's life... there will be nothing but the wall if our mind see a boundary around the box...they cant be blamed but who to be responsible is the head of war trigger....peace is nothing until we feel how worse life is without it..you choose a very strong theme Danny! ! _Soul

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Douglas Scotney 09 April 2013

Not knowing normal no more. There's a damaged brain in there.

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