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I enjoyed reading...........thoughts flow like a stream..........very nice.......

i really likes this thanks for sharing! ! Great write! !

Direct expressions of each one's nature is always welcome by all! A best way to express in poetry all things prolific and potential at once without elaboration is very nice indeed!

I do enjoy the flow your poem has to it! Very Nice. 10++

like thee flow it has...

From : Amitava Chakrabarty (Howrah India; Male; 39) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/16/2009 8: 23: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : hi Dear Friend 'beauty covertly enriches synthesis' the last line says it all. Well done. You are invited to read any of my poems and if u like the rhyme/rhythm you can proceed to another. cheers amitava

this piece is nicely done..tho, synthesis has many meaning and quantum light has many meanings too, but in this piece it goes hand in hand and make these stanzas beautiful..i like this..smart and expressive..

its just fantastic. good one

as elayna has said, the poem has good metaphors, and fine structure...

From : Elayna Lesabre (Australia ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/15/2009 11: 10: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Your poem Synthesis/Quantum Light Dear Dr Suhendu Wonderful metaphors - thank you. I especially liked: dream seeks gleams of hope... moonshine distills waves in ocean... precision bestirs of completeness summer cries by pain of inadequacy green bustles by quantum of light beauty covertly enriches synthesis Well written and much appreciated. 'Elayna'

Congratulations; but the poem is above my understanding. Quite a mix-up of thoughts synthesized by the micro quantum mechanics as light.

That was very beautiful. Great job.10.

subhendu, - Mystery of quantum romanticism. Very beautifully..10... Tsira

precision bestirs of completeness summer cries by pain of inadequacy green bustles by quantum of light beauty covertly enriches synthesis well done dear friend..this is really a rich poem with many symbolic indicators..what i love in your poetry is the sweet composition of words and proper link or verses... well done..loved it.

You are an amazing poet! 'Dream seek gleams of hope; dawn reaches goal seeing to sun' all forms of life in the world seems to balance even in its dualism in mind and matter. great poem a 10+++

You painted that beyond the beauty and I found the word in my small vocabulary is 'Exceptional'.