Synchronicity Comments

Lovely write on the ups and downs of love, or a relationship, at least if I can recall.. This is beautiful and as always, I'm late to the table.............marci.xo

Simply stunning. So much said, so eloquently and elegantly.. t x

Nice one Zen! So true, how when we want for something that feels right that the laws of the universe seem to defy...'tis the nature of love I'd say ;)

Not always in harmony but in melody of the heart... well done!

I like this poem...it's like the gps of love...the awkwardness between two people who care, but can't quite overcome the barrier between them. Sometimes being slightly out of sink is not always such a bad thing....fly in the face of adversity. Hugs, Dee

i'm loving it...the ending was a very nice twist ('twist' isn't really the word i'm looking for...) . but anyway, the poem is great, please write more ebone' ingram

Zen, this is beautiful, a little heartrending too. Reminds me a little of a poem by ASJ Tessimond..... In Love's Dances..... One retreats and one advances..... you should check it out - there are definitely undertones of this in your poem. Great work! HG: -) xxx