Synagogue Comments

The synagogue is the right place where the decision to crucify the love can be taken! sad!

lovely one! ! ! loved it! ! !

This poem is emollient in its context. Good job.

Great write Vipins, I liked this one! My favorite line is: Adored me as her King, Solaced, the crucified pain.

beutifull..............

Beautiful poem, truly phenomenal!

This poem caught my attention and i cannot stop reading it. It's soo good!

Sacred and celestial, heart's synagogue enshrined my love. Adored me as her King, ' No problem dear you can compare you love with any eternal and ethereal real thing in the world including god. As it is up-to poet to decide and put his feelings. However, sorry to contradict the opinion of another fellow poetess. But the truth is I appreciate the way the poem flowed naturally. Once again a hearty congratulation from my heart to you as you produced yet another miraculous love poem. Keeping going.......Cheerio for now!

Sacred and celestial, heart's synagogue enshrined my love. Adored me as her King, ' No problem dear you compare you love with any eternal and ethereal real thing in the world including god. As it is up-to poet to decide and put his feelings. However, sorry to contradict the opinion of another fellow poetess. But the truth is I appreciate the way the poem flowed naturally. Once again a hearty congratulation from my heart to you as you produced yet another miraculous love poem. Keeping going.......Cheerio for now!

Amazing :) but referring verse as 'adored me as her God'... woooo it's hard to accept this write..i know it sounds so sweet but yeah no person should be compared to God.. Sorry if that did offending you, because i'm the strict on that, maybe millions here not agree with me but that's my opinion...and othe than that i wow...beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! lovely write_Unwritten Soul

Divine love meaning love her in spirit? I'm speechless...you really are an amazing poet...

I love the words you used. What a way of loving. Strong!

very good descriptions-paints a colorful picture with words. Well done.

wow! ! ....this is awesome

Wow I loved this. A beautiful poem with a great flow to it. Perfect.

I like it. A bit more polish of poetry. I will do the same. I have this page. :)

Very nice poem indeed. Keep writing!