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Sorry for responding late, due to some translation works for Taiwanese poets. Your poetry is very sophisticate, mature and compelling, delivers a wonderful hue in expressing the inwards. Hope to have a chance to translate it into Taiwanese and share with our poets.

It's really awesome! ! ! These words raised fever to my mind. Thank you for sharing.

A rich poem. Embraced with high poetic imagery! Beautiful; D

wonderful poem well penned... liked it so much. Thanks for sharing...

a very nice poem to read adorned with fine words, good attempt

beneath the light of lamp post path smearing dusts of gold intones to wrest darkness to walk you across by downy darkness of winging shadow Your mood and style of expression is classical no doubt. Words sometimes carry the meaning of its ambiguous significance. Overall plain-speech raising its spine to an universality. Actually the craft touching me much. Intelligence lastly overpowers the emotions. 'To wrest darkness to walk you across........ Regards, 10+ Apoet B

what a tittle, what a poem under it. as if u took readers somewhere between an ocean and the sky... unlimited space one can find in this poem. good work!

'joy croons in its space divine' ......... wonderful!

this is wonderful.. indeed it is a symphony

You are a very sophisticated and gifted writer. You make me feel quite naive and lacking.

soothing breeze of breath eternal yet to cuddle the green of infinite bliss liked these expressions very much. infinite bliss eternal breath. touch of the divine in you. thank you for sharing.

It is a deep poetry, needs a mind of bottomless pit to appreciate its subtlety. One may be enchanted by its lines while others may trapped in a wandering mind.

wow..what a beautiful poem! ur writing is very mature. Sublime Indeed. Thanks! ~!

Title is perfect for the poem beautiful wordings, well written.... liked it... Thanks for sharing with me...10++

Tile is perfect for the poem, beautiful wordings, well written... liked it.. Thanks for sharing with me...10++

‘Mortal kiss will Stay mortal and Finally culminate into Immortal by the jingle of flute And swing of haven will be Sing Swing Sing Swing &c’ ~ niv Nice poem where one can unbuckle oneself…into rhapsodic gloss of pooching pooching and land into valley of Utopian El Dorado 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK