Monday, February 6, 2017

Symphony Of Unique Beautiful Star Song Melodies Comments

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stars stars calling calling calling
solar wind plasma fountains calling calling
what intensity of emotions feelings
what depths of life learning experiences;
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Terence George Craddock
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Daniel Brick 07 February 2017

Terry, I rarely ask people to read my poem(s) when I am commenting in one of theirs. It seems churlish to say, Oh, you wrote a nice poem. Now read mine! But this is a unique situation of serendipity and blessed coincidence. You must (yes: MUST) read the poem I wrote and posted yesterday, called THE THREE INTELLIGENCES. When you come to the very last line, you will see why this is so urgent to me. It is as if we were on the same wave length, and we wrote different stages of the same poem. And each of us used his own resources, and the result is AMPLIFICATION, not duplication. Both of our poems is necessary, and now their engagement with each other is necessary.

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