Saturday, July 20, 2013

Symphony In White Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tonight,
I want to write,
A poem that's all white,
No colors,
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Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Lyn Paul 08 October 2013

What a beautiful symphony you have created

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 31 July 2013

beautiful, imaginative and creative you are a good writter, Sandra thanks for sharing

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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2013

Upon a crystal lake, A Swan starts to awake, It's whiteness gently glides, Like tears from saddened eyes, So beautiful a metaphor! Sandra, you are just like the white swan yourself!

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

The final stanza is just fine Sandra.

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

Beautiful and very novel Sandra - an inspired and imaginative write from your beautiful pen.

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