Saturday, April 25, 2009

Symbol Comments

Rating: 5.0

To sacrifice our love
To immolate ourselves
In a ceremonial way
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'Love comes to bless The turf that wraps Our heavenly clay' Nice lovely poem,10++

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

The symbol of love, the sacrifices and its blessings all comes together in marriage. Great poem! ! !

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Nasreen Dawood 02 May 2009

deep and true...once marked with love the heavenly clay will bear the mark...the symbol...thanx for the beautiful piece.

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a wonderful and meaningful poem

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Seema Chowdhury 27 April 2009

very very nice and touchy poem.

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Lynda Robson 26 April 2009

Wonderful poem about love, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 26 April 2009

lovely verses --great poem surely ++10 anjali

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Ency Bearis 26 April 2009

wonderful verses...great poem...

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a true beautiful writting nightingale

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Estrella Baldemosa 26 April 2009

Abraham the father of many nations. What a great story! and the ceremonial sacrifice that almost killed his son Isaac and prior to that, the birth of his son Ishmael who is born of his wife's maid whose descendants now inhabited the present day Islamic nations. however it happened, it is symbolic...great write!

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Evaughn Gray 25 April 2009

True love is just an unbelivable thing to have in life i'm so grateful to have true love in mine..! Hazel G.E

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~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Stunning as always my friend, best of luck with your book release. You're a natural

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Sandra Fowler 25 April 2009

Love is ageless. Your last lines are very beautiful. Always your friend, Sandra

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Barry A. Lanier 25 April 2009

Wisdom coming from 'way back' and ironic....it hasn't changed....surely there must be a reason....

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

Unbelievable rationale Incredible goal We have to obey gr8 words of wisdom!

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Tsira Goge 25 April 2009

Amir, It's very good poem...All life is symbolics and proceeds as an infinite mystery...10.... Tsira

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C. P. Sharma 25 April 2009

Awesome! our existence and death are symbolic in themselves. CP

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