Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Sylvia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between the lines that lengthen through the day
Oh love, the ghost has dipped her pen in lemon juice
And written messages like magic play,
Silent, invisible muse.
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Linda Hepner
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Chuck Audette 05 June 2009

Love the metaphors and language in this. Interesting choice of 'fertilize' rather than 'water'. Salty tears, a fertile lie.... a tribute to a poet with a bitter life. -chuck

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Royness (*~*) 07 September 2006

agreed - beautiful poem, and the last line is one that seems oddly right

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Shelley B. Keats 11 October 2005

ditto, very beautiful and controlled...love the last graceful line!

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Raynette Eitel 11 October 2005

Oh, how beautiful, Linda. There's nothing more to say Raynette

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Linda Hepner

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