Friday, September 26, 2008

Sycamore Seeds Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sycamore seeds through the air gently falling
And winding in circles then rest on the ground,
This October morning so still and so peaceful
While hues of the autumn are cast all around.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 07 October 2008

The sycamore seeds through the air gently falling And as I walk on I catch one in my hand, I'll keep it forever for it shall remind me The day that I came to this wonderful land. YES! ! ! Excellent sentiments Andrew, honest and true feeling about this one Love duncan X

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Bonnie Collins 26 September 2008

Andrew what else can I say that I have not all ready! ! Your work tranquilizes me.... Penned with so much colour and imagery.... I can see the due drops starting to melt from the morning sun..... Beautifull.... Please know you are my favorie poet! ! Bonnie

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Thad Wilk 26 September 2008

A spectacular scene, inked from th' heart I could tell i'd 'loved this poem' Right from - The start ! ! Great read Andrew! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Tj Becker 26 September 2008

Your imagery is excellent, you can mentally see exactly the picture you are painting with your pen. Great flow just an excellent poem all the way round

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Ramesh T A 26 September 2008

Wonderful natural scene depicted in this poem is good for musing over in loneliness to rejuvenate inner spirit in Nature!

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