Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Swordsman’s Path Comments

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The twilight shows
Past the battlements;
A ruin the land she is.
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Nathan Vigil
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Amber Glistener 02 January 2012

I am unsure what to think. Yet it is very good poetry. A swordsman I wish to be some times. Yet is it right that we should be able to say who dies and who lives? A question I must ask myself every time that wish comes a knocking. Battles I do love reading though. War stories too. Never change your writing style for man is it nice. Sweet and strange to the ear. Just how I enjoy it. Maybe you could read something of mine.

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