Tuesday, September 20, 2016

Sword-Shaped Iris Comments

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Stand at the crossroads that darkened sky begins my story
Bereft of glory, I take my moral inventory
That's sure to cure me of my mental slips, relentlessness
And everything between the guy I was and who I am
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Robert Burgan
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Sister Frances 18 November 2016

I love the way this poem flows from line to line...and yes the title Sword-Shaped Iris was the dagger that attracted me. Keep writing and thank you for sharing, hope it is indeed inspiration for a song

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Robert Burgan 08 December 2016

Thank you for the kind feedback, I did in fact turn this into a song, it will be coming soon. Thank you for reading, keep checking for new stuff! !

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