Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Swooned With Joy Comments

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You almost swooned with joy
When I came to your place.
There is a constant smile
At your overstrained face.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 04 November 2015

The word RELIGION comes from the word for Relationship, in that context the relationship is between God and a human. Mystics have always seen human relationships as symbolic of the soul and God. So we could call your poem about you and Natalie a religious poem. This is what SUFI mystics did in poem after poem. I'm just sharing things with you that you are probably aware of. I taught a course in WORLD RELIGIONS for over ten years, so I had to learn about the six major World Religions

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

Act! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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