Monday, December 13, 2004

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They found the body at the quarry's gate.
The watchman had not seen what would have raised
his ex-policeman's trained and sordid brain.
He'd watched TV and some old Angus cattle
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 14 December 2004

Herbert i thought i was back at the OK CORAL buddy it roped me in your creative juice do flow, your not related to a 'TURNIP SWAN 'she has a similar style to yours, she has a leaning toward testicles god forbid Are you well herbert Warm regard allan

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Sandra Osborne 13 December 2004

You are indead a poet. I am so impressed, very well done, and fast. I am humbled.

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Lenchen Elf 13 December 2004

Powerful stuff H: -)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 13 December 2004

A story. Philosopy. Moral. Well done, my friend.

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