Saturday, November 23, 2013

Swirls Of Marmalade Comments

Rating: 4.5

My eyes closed tight

Spinning, falling
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Jennifer Colyne Hall
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Khairul Ahsan 23 November 2013

A wonderful depiction! The title is eye catching. 'It feels like a pipe dream A fantastic abstraction Release me from reality A strange way of thinking Keep me forever I've fallen..... In love with the sinful influence of marmalade' These spiralling thoughts make us too, 'spinning, falling'!

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Sandra Regan 23 November 2013

I love this poem, visual and colorful. Please check out one of mine if you get time. Thanks!

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2013

i just read the poet note AFTER i had decided to send this definition of pipe dream (copied from internet) to you. little did i know i could be correct, even though i was sort of kidding (planning to be) . Origin of PIPE DREAM from the fantasies brought about by the smoking of opium First Known Use: 1896 i seem to remember an illustration in A in W of a creature (a caterpillar?) smoking from a hookah (never tried one myself) . and i think i recall hearing that L.C. did write 'under the influence'. thanks for the note and LC thanks you for the mention. i especially enjoyed: My nose deceives me Heavenly scents Lash out at my nose and: Endless miles ...........thanks for sharing. you can come down now. :)

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Jennifer Colyne Hall

Jennifer Colyne Hall

Atlanta, Georgia
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