Swirling Times...0406-2k12 Comments

An idyllic scene painted with a pen dipped in love and care for travelers and caravans. As usual beautiful diction that is never forced makes it an impressive write.

there's certain movement we trail along... whatever the theme/emotion u r the best at couplets... u proved it again!

Thank you so much Sat! ! :) This is an amazing poem, beautiful!

beautifully pastoral......well rhymed

Nice use of the metonymy, the message being so well penned by this way-thank you for sharing.Mari.

Wonderful poem, enjoyed reading it.

A flawless picture! Nice word play and rhyming!

Good job...........!

Excellent poetry, very well written and rhymed.

well depicts today's times