My dad's unwilting enthusiasm
does little to reduce my anxiety
actually quite augments it
as I try not to hit the pavement
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You put your reader not only there on that sidewalk on a bike- -you put your reader inside your heart and mind that day and we looked up and beheld your father and our own. A lovely lovely poem, Sofia, with such vivid phrases and lines. A 10 is not enough.
Now I am blushing...Thank you so much for this rave review. Be blessed Susan!
Nice memories expressed here! I am so sorry for the loss of your father.
A wonderful poem and excellent accompanying notes. My deepest sympathies on the loss of your beloved father
Thank you so much Kelly. I am still dealing with the loss. So glad to hear from you. Take care, my friend!
This reminded me my first bycycle ride when I was around 6 years, a nice poem, Sofia.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I am so glad you liked it! It means a lot to read such beautiful comments!