Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Swirling Around Like In A Satin-Lined Jewelry Box By Sofia Kioroglou Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dad's unwilting enthusiasm
does little to reduce my anxiety
actually quite augments it
as I try not to hit the pavement
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Sofia Kioroglou
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M Asim Nehal 25 June 2016

This reminded me my first bycycle ride when I was around 6 years, a nice poem, Sofia.

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M Asim Nehal 25 June 2016

Bicycle

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Sofia Kioroglou 26 June 2016

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I am so glad you liked it! It means a lot to read such beautiful comments!

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Susan Williams 03 June 2016

You put your reader not only there on that sidewalk on a bike- -you put your reader inside your heart and mind that day and we looked up and beheld your father and our own. A lovely lovely poem, Sofia, with such vivid phrases and lines. A 10 is not enough.

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Sofia Kioroglou 26 June 2016

Now I am blushing...Thank you so much for this rave review. Be blessed Susan!

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Leloudia Migdali 30 May 2016

Nice memories expressed here! I am so sorry for the loss of your father.

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2016

A wonderful poem and excellent accompanying notes. My deepest sympathies on the loss of your beloved father

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Sofia Kioroglou 17 May 2016

Thank you so much Kelly. I am still dealing with the loss. So glad to hear from you. Take care, my friend!

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