Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Swirling Around In The Desert Sky Comments

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Swirling around in the desert sky,
Where not even the ravens choose to fly.
Down off the mountains in a furious gale,
Darkening the desert sky so pale.
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Juan Olivarez
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Heather Wilson 21 June 2012

Wonderful description, a great write, pleased I`m not there.

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Heather Wilson 21 June 2012

Wonderful description of a mojave sandstorm, which I now have a far better chance to imagine. a great write Juan.

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Smoky Hoss 20 June 2012

Again my friend I must compliment you on your keen vision within the magical desert-land! It makes me wish I was there, right now... you know.

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Valerie Dohren 19 June 2012

Great poem Juan, very well written.

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